Wednesday, January 4, 2017

Forbidden Love Comments

Rating: 4.8

In a moment I shall ne'er forget,
Standing in a cold, dark corridor.
A sultry beauty caught my eye,
Whose peer I had not seen before.
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Mike Hunter
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Chinedu Dike 05 January 2017

An insightful depiction of love at first sight - a natural mutual affinity, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Mike. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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Bildad Hawi 05 January 2017

The description of the untold affection to the subject and yearning is spectacular. Well written.

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