Monday, August 15, 2011

Fore He Promised Comments

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She presses the send button,
not thinking of the consequences before her.
Fore he said he promises,
O' course shall I believe him,
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Rylie Shoop
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Stefanie Fontker 22 August 2011

Lost love is an evident theme in this poem. It is a common one, but you seem to have done it very well. This is some great poetry.

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