In the field there grow lovely flowers,
Growing beauty, for the world to see.
But a gardener soon comes to cut them;
An arrangement in futility.
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What a wonderful spin about the dead representing the dying! Ten Again! Biff
Yes, I would say this is really and interesting work. Your intent comes across clearly. May I suggest one change: 'now or never' means the opposite of 'now or ever' which I do think your really meant. Adeline