Sunday, July 10, 2011

Forever Happy Comments

Rating: 5.0

I lay there with you
Staring into your sleepy eyes
I hug your arm refusing to let go
I brush my hand across your face
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Evelyn Knight
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 10 July 2011

Marvellous poem written with great skill. Rich in imagery and emotions. I liked and rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'ABORTION' on page 4.

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