Sunday, February 24, 2008

Forget Him Comments

Rating: 4.5

Forget his name,
Forget his face,
Forget his kiss,
His warm embrace.
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danielle wiltshire
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Greenwolfe 1962 26 June 2008

This is a very impressive display of talent. The writer uses the repetition device to its greatest effect. Many others attempt to do this but they always seen to mess it up, she didn't. There are a few slip ups along the way, but they are barely noticeable. Otherwise, this weould be a 10 from me. It sometimes embarasses me to know that so many young people have a natural talent I didn't have at their age. Simply wonderful! GW62

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