Thursday, August 4, 2011

Four Feelings Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's funny when the leaves start to fall,
After they switch colors with each other,
And the days become shorter.
The bonfires grow taller,
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Tailor Bell 06 August 2011

i personally enjoy a carefree meter more than predictable structure...above the cleverness of rhyme or reason. good read, bria. -tailor

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