Wednesday, July 24, 2013

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Rating: 3.5

My reasons to stay were never right
My reasons to leave did not suffice
To feel the empty gaping hole
Which consumes more now than it did before
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Riya Gangwar
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Lavigne Kin 24 July 2013

Thank You! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! :)

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Khairul Ahsan 24 July 2013

The first two lines and the last two have impressed me. Over all, a good poem.

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