Friend Poem by aashka thakkar

Friend



I met a person similar to me,
loved the things which i did
Fond of me.
I loved to be with her.
happy to be her friend.
but the thread between us,
was cut by a mistake.
it was my fault,
that i left the thread lose.
my mistake broke all my threads.
So know i never make friends.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sadath Ali Baig 25 December 2009

Seems to be an old poem of yours. Can you please check if the below lines please, I think a typo has crept up.... my mistake broke all my threads. So know i never make friends. It should have read - So now I never make friends. This poem and God's gift when compared show how brilliantly you have matured as a writer. Astonishing.... Please continue writing.

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Seema Chowdhury 14 October 2009

that can happen in friendship, just don't give up. you will meet many people and will many friends in life. just don't be so hard on yourself. take care see some of my new poems 1. dwell in my soul pg1 2. watch the magic happen pg3

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