aashka thakkar

Friend

I met a person similar to me,
loved the things which i did
Fond of me.
I loved to be with her.
happy to be her friend.
but the thread between us,
was cut by a mistake.
it was my fault,
that i left the thread lose.
my mistake broke all my threads.
So know i never make friends.

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 14, 2009
Poem Edited: Thursday, June 30, 2011

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Comments about Friend by aashka thakkar

  • Sadath Ali Baig (12/25/2009 4:32:00 AM)

    Seems to be an old poem of yours. Can you please check if the below lines please, I think a typo has crept up....

    my mistake broke all my threads.
    So know i never make friends.

    It should have read - So now I never make friends.

    This poem and God's gift when compared show how brilliantly you have matured as a writer. Astonishing.... Please continue writing.

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  • Seema Chowdhury (10/14/2009 7:08:00 AM)

    that can happen in friendship,
    just don't give up.
    you will meet many people and will many friends in life.
    just don't be so hard on yourself.
    take care

    see some of my new poems

    1. dwell in my soul pg1
    2. watch the magic happen pg3

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