Sunday, December 20, 2015

Friend To Enemy Comments

Rating: 4.5

You were once my friend and now you're my enemy,
If you've forgotten please let me refresh your memory.
When no one wanted you around I was there,
I listened and respected you and I really did care.
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Laurina Belle
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Chinedu Dike 26 December 2015

Friendship and enmity seem to be worlds apart, yet only a thin line divides the two. Once the natural balance of the two is tilted, an enemy could become a friend or a friend an enemy. A lovely depiction of a foe wearing the veil of friendship, well articulated and insightfully penned in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing Laurina.

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