Thursday, November 26, 2009

From Dawn To Darkness Comments

Rating: 4.7

Look to the horizon!
The light of Dawn has finally come!
Praise be to the light that saves us!
Rejoice in its warmth!
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Jason Daniels
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Jean Dament 27 January 2010

There is great drama being expressed in this lovely poem of yours. I agree with Serenity Prayer's comments full heartedly. Well writeen & another one with a great flow to it. Spiritsong

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Jean Dament 27 January 2010

There is great drama being expressed in this lovely poem of yours. I agree with Serenity Prayer's comments full heartedly. Well writeen & another one with a great flow to it. Spiritsong

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Serenity Prayer 27 November 2009

i like how the first paragraph is all happiness, the second confusion, and the third sadness and hopelessness. very creative. great job.

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