Look to the horizon!
The light of Dawn has finally come!
Praise be to the light that saves us!
Rejoice in its warmth!
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There is great drama being expressed in this lovely poem of yours. I agree with Serenity Prayer's comments full heartedly. Well writeen & another one with a great flow to it. Spiritsong
i like how the first paragraph is all happiness, the second confusion, and the third sadness and hopelessness. very creative. great job.
There is great drama being expressed in this lovely poem of yours. I agree with Serenity Prayer's comments full heartedly. Well writeen & another one with a great flow to it. Spiritsong