Wednesday, September 9, 2009

From Sojic To Vampric Delight Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her scent and surrounding aura engulfs my own and I feel her emanating darkness all around me, like a victim ensnared in the clasp of two gigantic hands that belong to a overwhelming demon of terrible power.

I extended my neck as a sign of good faith so she may have a taste for the first time and fell limp in her arms as she drained the life out of me. Sharp teeth pierced my neck to draw blood then inhaled deeply to finish me off slowly.
All free thought and resistance flowed out of me
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Joshua Mccoy
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Nicole Gehrman 22 November 2009

i like this piece u used good description and had great ideas combined in this piece

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