From The Desk Of (04) Poem by Genevieve Surrender

From The Desk Of (04)

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From the desk of
a dear man's muse:

Women
are like apples.
They bruise easilly,
even if you can't see it
on the outside.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maggie Flanagan-Wilkie 16 October 2005

I like this but think you should leave this off - 'And neither you nor the apple know what's happened' You see, we do know how and why we bruise. We just don't say much about it.

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