Front Row Comments

I second everything Max has written. The two lines he mentioned were also my favorites. I think you would do well to 'boil this down to a fine crystal.' That's an image I go with for poetry, meaning that everything extraneous needs to be dropped and at last what you have left is pure poetry. You have a great start...for love poems on this site are dime a dozen and yours has much that is unique. Good work. Raynette