Wednesday, December 24, 2008

Frozen Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your love is embedded in my heart, like a deep wound
my eyes ask when shall we see her, in my heart I pray
hopefully soon.
Your departure has left me trapped in my mind, gasping for air
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Lorenzo Cruz
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Marieta Maglas 09 June 2009

This wonderful poem, containing comparisons like: ''love is embedded in my heart, like a deep wound'', cognitive metaphors like: ''Your departure has left me trapped in my mind, ''and epithets like: ''deep wound'' is a a poem of symbolism.I can imagine a painting with a frozen face in the center and a lot of symbols around for explaining the cause of this change.I like it...10++ from me

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Lorenzo Cruz

Lorenzo Cruz

South Bend, IN
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