Frozen Water Poem by Shahid shafi

Frozen Water

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shall i resembel to frozen pounds!
where i seeks who we are.
pounds! Likely melt when it zounds.
like a lava in the wooden jar./
ooh! You dear to be such.
you know so hard to be found.
dont putfor like a grudge
And dont sound like to be pound./
Your feelings cant be hold
when the sun shades become so cold
so let me know how about you'r not!
Stain to be stained you got/
How could your nature diffcult to be
like that pound near beneath the sea
likely where we used to be
without harm and feel used to see./
How could i taste the eratic sip
without seeking the unknown grip
hmm! worried about your nature we are
like the pound tree seems nearer but so far/
Now, the sun begins to shine.
wipeout the pound like a spectrum shrine
Now the horrizon begins to resurge.
and every night is followed by sun emerge

Frozen Water
Sunday, August 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: painful
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is devoted to my sucess.This is the conversational poem with my sucess, (Pound is reffered to barriers of my sucess) . How it pains when any step of the sucess of persons has the barriers that couldnt leave him without taking his breath. This is complete conversation between the barriers, pain with me.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shahid Shafi 18 August 2015

thankyou for feedback

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Kelly Kurt 16 August 2015

An excellent poem, Shahid. Translation needs a little work but the intent came through. Peace

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