Full Circle Poem by Richa Tiwari Joshi

Full Circle

Rating: 4.8


Whispers of your promise dangled around for long, as the world of dream vanished from the core of eyes, dropp by drop.
The lines of your face slipped through the tip of hands, day by day.

A World was woven around you, where hope shined between the green leaves and love danced on every tune,
you were here, there and every where, suddenly you were no where.

Life comes to a halt when a hope dies, a patch of doubt takes over the green of trust.
Unanswered questions surround the being and with every heavy breath a monstrous hand cluches the greiving heart, Silent tears wet the pillow everynight.
Every face on street resembles you.....
Some come out of this turmoil and leave a part of their soul to live a compromise on the name of happiness,
Some live this cycle till the weary end.
I ask YOU, next time when you hold a hand and whisper a promise, make sure you mean it!
Coz life comes to a full circle and what you give comes back.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vidi Writes 11 May 2008

Girls, You deserve greater respect in society and home When you respect yourself and have self-confidence During the young age, build your personality Let the boiling blood have a vision to reach Than to hang around, into the erratic emotions. Yes... Circle may be formed may not be But life's experiences are formed with emotions You, me and all of us have experiences similar Its wise to weigh each one with balance Give only that much weightage it deserves. Sincerely penned...

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Geetanjali Tuli 29 January 2008

People who have been wrting poetry for long would have complicated this same thought abt life by writing it with high-fi words and some complicated logic. U have managed to say it wonderfully in simple words. Life is simple, its we who complicate it.

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Catastrophe King 29 December 2007

This is truly well said...... you have the unique talent of expression & story telling... it is definitely an interesting read on a subject much explored by many.... my advice is not to worry much on the bygones... life has much more better things in store for you....... CHEERS!

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