Full Moon Comments

nice descriptive poem, wonderful rhymes, lovely to read.10

Loved the Morpheus cloak line. It's marvelous with a wonderful writing style.

Amit, I am sure that it is not your first poem...may be, it is your first step here....And so nice it is....I congratulate you for your thought process.....Wish you a very august journey....

this is introducing ha since this is your first poem..this is nice dear, , this first poem is the first proof that u could be a good poet...cheers dear....add more...WELCOME TO PH...wait...i guess u have some friends here, someone is inviting me for this nice poem of yours...to your friend who invited me, ...thanks dear...naizz

nice poem...the verbal imageries there are surprisingly attractive...thanks...10

very lovely and magical 10

Very beautiful! It's a bedtime story and a mystical dream. Yes I like iy very much-10