Monday, December 14, 2009

Funeral Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don’t breathe
Don’t move
Hold still
Still hold
...
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Jennifer Granville
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masked lady 15 December 2009

NICELY WRITTEN. It gets into the system while reading. A mournful poem for unborn babies. Poor babies.... If only they can do something to help themselves, if only they have a choice.... You write well girl. Keep writing. GOD BLESS.

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