Gamble Poem by Roxy Gonro

Gamble



I took a gamble
The biggest gamble I will take.
And I lost.
I ended up losing my best friends,
Losing my old life,
Losing the mural I had painted of what this world was to me.
But when I looked up,
I saw the real people who stand by me through it all.
A new path with new opportunities,
And it’s not the same mural I had painted,
It’s better.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Matt Soriano 06 April 2009

Your words were very colorful and I like how you put your pain into each line and to each word. I want you to keep this up! 'Write on'

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Verse full of pain, regret, and poignancy. Thank you for posting this. Peace, L&T

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