So, you say that this is the end
I can't say that I've ever had a better friend
You take these moments that we've had
And say 'how can you feel sad'
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I gave this an 8 but I would have scored it much better if it had been shorter.
There is no need to repeat yourself in a poem unless it is with a rhyming word
or there is a phrase that you repeat for a useful purpose. That was not the case here. This poem is too long .
GW62
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I gave this an 8 but I would have scored it much better if it had been shorter. There is no need to repeat yourself in a poem unless it is with a rhyming word or there is a phrase that you repeat for a useful purpose. That was not the case here. This poem is too long . GW62