Tuesday, September 16, 2008

Give Me One More Breath Comments

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Bring me back from death.
Give me one more breath.
Give me my life let me cry.
Just dont let me die.
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Carrie Sprouse 11 October 2008

your amazing, your better then I am!

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Barbara Terry 16 September 2008

This is absolutely stunning. The realness of a person's last wish not to die, but to be alive, so her family doesn't cry or have the fears of the dying person's soul, just grabs at the heartstrings and pulls them until we cry. This is such a sad poem, full of reproach and the actual fear of dying. But if we believe in our Lord Jesus, then we need not fear the loss of physical life, because our soul lives on in Him. Thank you for sharing this very passionate plea not to die. Stay strong Kyla, because it is in our strength that we can heal. Hugs, Barbara

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