Thursday, April 22, 2010

Giving Up Comments

Rating: 4.5

Ive finally gave up
as i droped my fake smile i have worn
i let the tears fall down my face
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Dani Blackham
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Craig Anderson 30 April 2010

Your very descriptive in your writing, your saying more by writing less, if that makes sense. Sad piece. Regards. Craig.

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