Dani Blackham

Rookie (03/08/1988)

Giving Up - Poem by Dani Blackham

Ive finally gave up
as i droped my fake smile i have worn
i let the tears fall down my face

i then wisper softly to myself
i can't do this anymore
i repeat it alittle louder this time
JUST to make sure

do i believe these words myself? ? ?
i say it again...
i can't do this anymore

as i finally
CLOSE THE DOOR

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Comments about Giving Up by Dani Blackham

  • Craig Anderson (4/30/2010 7:37:00 AM)


    Your very descriptive in your writing, your saying more by writing less, if that makes sense. Sad piece.
    Regards.
    Craig.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 22, 2010



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