Giving Up Poem by Dani Blackham

Giving Up

Rating: 4.5


Ive finally gave up
as i droped my fake smile i have worn
i let the tears fall down my face

i then wisper softly to myself
i can't do this anymore
i repeat it alittle louder this time
JUST to make sure

do i believe these words myself? ? ?
i say it again...
i can't do this anymore

as i finally
CLOSE THE DOOR

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Craig Anderson 30 April 2010

Your very descriptive in your writing, your saying more by writing less, if that makes sense. Sad piece. Regards. Craig.

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