Monday, June 27, 2011

God's Callin You Comments

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He's callin you and you puttin him on hold
Steady chasin after that paper and gold.
He called you the other day and you said you were on the other line
You said you were busy out in the streets 'tryin to get mine'
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 27 June 2011

Great poem. Wonderfully conceived. I liked it for its remarkable imagery and decent style. Rated it 10. TFS..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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