Today, God gave a message to me,
For success there's only one key,
But you'll have to give a large fee,
This is the message between you and me.
My heart articulates that you must change,
With such a slender range,
You can't do your best,
So how will you pass life's hard test?
Oh you girl, a friend of mine,
I know you work from just seven till nine,
Well, work best in these hours,
And I'll give you my love showers.
Life will give sufferings to you,
And those who will help you are few.
Clear all your misgivings now,
And I'll always be telling you how.
You'll also have to pass through an ordeal,
And this pain, you'll have to conceal,
So you must very silently feel,
Believe that it'll someday heal.
Dear, it's not too late,
Start up! You can't just wait,
Then no matter what is in your fate,
Success will be opening its gate.
Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Outstanding poem with a sublime message. Quite inspiring. Thanks.