patrick o'shaughnessy

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Gods Gift - Poem by patrick o'shaughnessy

The moon and stars
they came to see
god's masterpeice
his mystery

they knew this was right
they saw from the start
that he made true beauty
it came from his heart

god gave it to the earth
it didnt know what to do
cause it looked like a miracle
when he gave up you

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  • (6/9/2010 12:42:00 PM)


    So sweet and heartfelt! Loved the last line. Enjoyed the Read. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 5, 2010



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