Gone Poem by nathan hawk

Gone

Rating: 5.0


Are we meant to be?
Are we meant to last?
When I look at you...
All I see is our past.

Now you are gone
Gone forever
Will I survive?
I think NEVER! ! !

As we walk away
Please dont look back
I'll never forgive myself
And the heart I lack

As I turn my back
And look over my shoulder
You are now gone
As the night gets colder

As i sit and wait
Listening for a sound
Wondering, Wondering, Wondering
If you are still around! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LCPL Hawk 05 May 2011

ik makayla this was when caitlin and i were dating but now shes like a sister to me

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Makayla Straight 26 April 2011

I hate to say it but maybe losing her was for the best. It made you who you are today. A U.S. Marine. And a good friend. Things happen for a reason, good writing.

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wonderful... it hurts to lose someone you really cared for... ik ive had it happen... and just a tip writing poetry doesnt have to be depressing. read those about love or something happy you might get inspired. just a thought.10/10

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nathan hawk

nathan hawk

petersburg west virginia
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