Sunday, May 18, 2003

Gone Comments

Rating: 3.1

You left for a 'ride, '
But an hour later you still hadn't returned,
I was so afraid,
The two of you had gone together,
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Jessica Kelly
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Jid Thobhani 25 March 2006

What a great pain you are carring inside you! I can feel your words. I wish you find a shoulder on you can count and put your tears. Look around there would be someone come to comfirt and hold you and to take your side. You can reject but please don't ignore.

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Gina PrettyBrownEyes 29 January 2005

i love the raw emotion displayed here. you're very talented. keep writing!

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