Goodbye Poem by sharmaine walker

Goodbye

Rating: 4.0


IT HURTS THE MOST WHEN YOUR GONE

AND I AM LEFT HOLDING ON

LIKE AND SONG THT PLAYS ON AND ON

MY LOVE FOR YOU WAS STILL STRONG,

I DONT UNDERSTAND WHY YOU LEFT

I GOT THIS BURNING FEELING IN MY CHEST

MY Heart ACHS, WHY WAS I YOUR MISTAKE

I CANT BELIVE I BELIVED YOU WHEN YOU SAID YOU CARED

AND YOU WOULD ALWAYS BE THERE

BECAUSE YOU NOT EVEN IN SIGHT, MAN I LOVED YOU WITH ALL MY MIGHT

PROMISES ARE MENT TO BE BROKE, AND I GUESS I AM LEFT TO FEEL THE HURT

AND THE BURDEN OF KNOWING YOUR GONE

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 December 2011

PROMISES ARE MENT TO BE BROKE, I AM I GUESS I AM LEFT TO FEEL THE HURT AND THE BURDEN OF KNOWING YOUR GONE.... sad plight.. promises are to be kept alive.. nice poem with good touching words....10

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Dianna Renate Evans 20 December 2011

ur poems r GREAT i love them and u r a great writer

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