Goodbye Poem by Lynette young

Goodbye

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I cut myself
through the flesh
i cut so deep
i begin to weep
i cut it with a razor blade
my wounds will eventually fade
all my pain starts to dissapear
also with all of my fears
scars all over my skin
i try to keep myself locked in
in my room i cry
i just wish i could die
all the things they've done
i just wish we could of had fun
all the things they said
running through my head
this is the last ill think of you
this is all i will do
it is now ten o'clock
am i the key or the lock
it's starting to go dim
and i dropp the pin
it's now gone black
i will not be back
but now i say goodbye
because i am about to die

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Red Blooded Black Hearted 02 September 2007

That poem is beautifully sad. Good work.

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Lynette young

Lynette young

Wales, UK
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