Goodbye X Poem by MeganOlivia Maxwell

Goodbye X

Rating: 4.5


As I watch the old house burn
with those feirce flames
my heart begins to pound like thunder
Screams passing threw my ears, my head
What have I done? !
I catch one more glimps
Then I ran
I ran as fast as my legs could go worried of followers, witnesses
I didnt think
I didnt know
I was Scared, Frightened! !
Turning around slowly, i see my childhood appear
Me running to the neighbours house
this is where my parents were murdered
and now i have just committed the same crime
The massive flames caught in my eye as i watch it burn
I wanted to die
I dropped
Laying there for two minutes
screaming still going threw my head
I slowly stand up
Pacing towards the house thinking, wondering
step by step i thought
then i ran in faster then the speed of light
I went
I went in the house of flames
I carried out 3 people then went back in
I searched and scanned all the room
My clothes on fire
Then i sat down quietly
i stayed there until my life was taken
Two seconds before a roar louder then a pack of lions
was my way of saying
GoodBye x

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roger Cornish 05 March 2008

This is a really imaginative poem... well done M! Rx

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Sophie Shaw 05 March 2008

Jee whiz, please do not ever do this to yourself coz if you do i will coz i would die for you, I LOVE YOU THAT MUCH.

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