Monday, September 16, 2024

Grace In The Fight Comments

Rating: 4.5

What have I got to do?
For this life to become alright.
Sleep, thrive and fight?
Cause blood's all I see within my sight.
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Adrians Vasiljevs
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Bri Edwards 27 October 2024

And humans did not know WHY they had been created, nor how nor why. Over years, 'man' naturally fell into the 'warring mood/mode', especially as available land and resources began to become scarce? ? ? ? ; (

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Bri Edwards 27 October 2024

(cont.) BUT...there was nothing for 'god' to write with OR on, ....so 'God' just gathered some dust and spit and created 'Man' for fun & with no real plans beyond that.

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Bri Edwards 27 October 2024

I'd put '? ' after line 2, not after line 1. 'So my questions still stands, What humans are truly made for...' Damn if I, Bri, know! ! ! ! Perhaps a 'god' had some thoughts on her/his/its coffee break and wanted to write poetry. (cont.)

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