Sunday, January 13, 2008

Greyscale Comments

Rating: 4.5

The heavy legs that drag across
A floor of cold, concrete
Still life
...
Read full text

April Down
COMMENTS
okeydokey #3 13 January 2008

the taste of departure is...what keeps me becoming back...you know...if there is return...but this does not sound like a love story...oh well...so what is...'bugging' you...haha...just kidding...another grand poem...i like the perspective of the different color effects...it really makes the...blocking...you know...in parentheses...pop out...sweet...

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success