(growing Pains) 3. Dog-Eat-Dog (First Day At The Toddler Group) Poem by Janice Windle

(growing Pains) 3. Dog-Eat-Dog (First Day At The Toddler Group)

Rating: 2.8


You are confident
in your babywalker
gliding like a ballroom dancer
among the toddling two-year-olds.

Quick as a trained assassin,
a child of maybe nearly three,
comes running up – and takes your little hand.
You smile...
he bites... you scream...
I'm there to comfort...

it's your first lesson
in the unpredictability
of human contact
in a dog-eat-dog world.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Jarvis 12 July 2009

'You are confident/ in your babywalker/ gliding like a ballroom dancer...' this superb image is so real it's tangible, as is the pain and emotion 'of human contact/ in a dog-eat-dog world.' You have managed to transform the first harsh brush with reality into a beautiful poem. S :)

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