Friday, September 7, 2007

Growing Up Comments

Rating: 3.5

Growing up is a hard thing to do, but Im doin it

Growing up and being a good person is hard to do, but
Im doin it
...
Read full text

Josh Austin
COMMENTS
Shannon Nagel 17 September 2007

Growing up is how we learn about life. I know the feeling of wondering if 'some people' are ever going to grow up. I like how you repeated the line, 'Growing up........, but I am doing it.' It gave the poem great flow. Keep writing. :) Shannon

0 0 Reply
Josh Austin

Josh Austin

Toledo Ohio
Close
Error Success