Saturday, July 21, 2007

Haiku Comments

Rating: 5.0

Child's Prayer

Shadows writhe and creep.
My angel, please, stay by me,
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Mary Naylor
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Sandra Fowler 22 July 2007

Beautiful work. You are a master of the Haiku form. It would be hard to choose a favorite. I wish I could give each one of them a ten. I believe, though, I prefer the one about the child and his angel. It is very touching. We all need angels to protect us from the dark. Take care. Love,

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