Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary

Rookie (30th December 1978 / Madhubani, Bihar, India)

Haiku: Leaves In The Autumn - Poem by Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary

Leaves in the Autumn
Speading its crunchy carpet
To replace green grass

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  • (4/12/2008 2:48:00 AM)

    The second line has only 6 syllables, the word 'spread is only one syllable. You also misspelled the word 'spread'. You wrote 'spead'. I love Autumn though, the colors are spectacular. Thank you for sharing.

    Love & hugs,
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 12, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 12, 2008

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