Half Awaken Poem by Wei Liang Lim

Half Awaken

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To be half awake...
The pain won't be as much...
The world will be felt in half...
The Heart will never be mended...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Orran Ainmire 07 March 2008

Oh! Cool! The number of syllables rises every line.5,6,7 then 8. Short, but an encompassing poem on dealing with pain. Thank you for sharing.

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Wei Liang Lim

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