Half Clothed In Red Velvet (By Mimi C. Mata) Poem by Mimi Mata

Half Clothed In Red Velvet (By Mimi C. Mata)



Tangled heart
and a rhetorical notion
Plasma shore and a blood red sun my potion
Steel doors and an oppositional mirror
Head and limbs; a broken bow that quivers...

Where is my soul for I've lost my aim?
A tightened core; a melody restrained,
Thousands of betrayers who came to see
Their saddened faces that half smiled like me.

Ah, and my petals they rotated over and over
Writhing in the distance to the notes that remained
Half clothed in red velvet, and slightly insane
Half smiling in delight amidst the dissipating rain...

And rage violently played my drums
Stood around me and metaphorically hummed
Sadness sat with heads thrown back and they strummed
To the inconsolable soul I've become.

Restless tangled heart
With a rhetorical notion
Did you sink in a plasma shore
And drink your blood red sun; a poisonous potion? ...
Wilted red flower open your steel doors
Find your petals that still remain
Half clothed in red velvet...
And slightly insane.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a personal battle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Seale 19 September 2012

...Half clothed in red velvet... And slightly insane. _ Another Beautiful piece Mimi, Naked is the soul, awaiting it's demise, the heart Half Clothed in Red Velvet, beating in your hand... Your tears mingle with mine...and become one in the same.... Driving me ever closer to the edge and slightly Insane. Exqusite Write! ! ! LOved it! ; -) -Kelly.

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