Half Mystery Poem by Pranesh Patil

Half Mystery

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In abyss of my heart, a mystery unsolved..
a thriller, riddle and abstruseness.
Blood in the veins flow a million times..
gushes to the heart like.. kid back home..
to unfold the story which happened elsewhere..
some happy and pain in a tidbit quatrain.

My heart beats a million times..
fast and furious..in a rhythmic style..
for it has to listen a while and transmit a mile,
to a friend on board, who is floating erstwhile..
foretell the worst and retain the rest..
some bitter, some spicy and sweet memories it contain.


Tonnes of data processed as it is piled,
I dont know.. what happens of me is wild,
my mind sinks in and body defused,
charming face has a fate disgraced,
mystery unsolved evolves around me,
rhetorical question half answered - only by me, only by me!

Tuesday, June 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,mystery
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sometimes we worry of something and keep searching for answers, A mystery then evolves around us to find a solution and when we seldom find a solution we'r not happy or we feel distressed.
'Half mystery' here refers to humans attempt to solve the problem without the Almighty's help is like and attempt half made or half processed.The solution to the problem still remains a mystery..is'nt it?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 10 September 2019

In abyss of my heart, a mystery unsolved.. a thriller, riddle and abstruseness. Blood in the veins flow a million times.. gushes to the heart like.. so ture the whole life is a mystery. thank u for highlighting this human truth. tony

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