Soul Writer

Rookie - 18 Points (10/10/1983 / Australia)

Hani Ghaleb Jaber - Poem by Soul Writer

Hani Ghaleb Jaber
It was a cold day in September when you where slain
and on the coldest days i still feel that pain

We started as enemies in the school ground
2 young brother trying to prove a point
Ended up 2 young brother's sharing a joint

You showed us you talents in lyrical poetry
such words have never been spoken
and neva will that bond be broken

You showed us you talents in Break Dancing
The only one who could pull off the six step
And thats a memory we can neva forget

Small in frame but large in heart
never scared to speak your mind
Alas this is the reason you travelled blind

Blind to what lied ahead
If only you opened your eyes you would have seen
The path you where taking was terribly obscene

Hani Ghaled Jaber
It was a cold day in September when you where slain
But never will i allow your memory to die in vain


Comments about Hani Ghaleb Jaber by Soul Writer

  • (1/10/2008 4:13:00 AM)

    well expressed..best wishes :) (Report) Reply

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  • (6/20/2007 3:48:00 PM)

    A beautiful tribute to a beloved friend. The words you use express that wonderful feeling of how close you were and the bond that united the both of you. Top Marks and thanks for sharing it my friend.
    David
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 20, 2007

Poem Edited: Sunday, March 13, 2011


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