Happiness Poem by Andrew BensleyPage

Happiness



Happiness, is it not something to hope for?
Is it not something to love?

What is this so called love you speak of..
turning around our minds so that we can see above..
the lies.. which made us happy..
The pain we endured when the lies became reality..

After that, we pray, for a better day,
to take so in the end we can say, 'what a day'..

Yes i speak the truth for i am happy..
God has turned around my heart,
So instead of crying i am laughing..

Make sure you speak the truth of God, every day,
Make sure you speak the truth in every way..
For today could be the day where he's testing your faith..
So give him no reason to be sad, i say :)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. L. 13 March 2010

Loved the poem...had great rhyme scheme. Also had great depth to it. =)

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Andrew Herrera 11 March 2010

I love the fact that you've managed to make the rhyme scheme in this poem obvious, but subtle at the same time. I didn't really like the last line, but I give this poem a 7.5

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happiness comes from the heart and yes God gives you the strength and the heart for happiness and you should be very thankful for He will be there no matter what.

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Aimee Lee 09 March 2010

wow, a happy-ish poem. i like the topic. its so true that God can turn everything around....if u let Him...

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Becca Barton 08 March 2010

wow I really liked this poem... your a good poet... keep up the good work=)

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