Happiness Poem by Suki Nakamura

Happiness

Rating: 5.0


actually, it was not the tea
not even the sweet confection

or the other red concoction
my dear, it was your hands that

touch mine, your gaze that pierces
like a lance to my soul

that bleeding that fulfills me
that affection that was concealed

it was not the tea or the concoction
my dear, it was the benediction,

my dear, let me be frank, since
it was you, in fact.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 03 September 2009

Great poem, Suki, well penned, you got my vote 10+, hope you go to my page and read my poem titled''IN PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS', keep it up, Love and Peace, Romeo

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