patrick o'shaughnessy

Rookie - 0 Points (09/12/92 / merced california)

Heart Break - Poem by patrick o'shaughnessy

A heart brake is wrongly named
cause it never brakes at all
instead it stops on the spot
not even the comfort of a fall

cause when you fall
the pain stops for a while
you can get back up
and put on a smile

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  • Robin Serdynski (9/1/2010 12:15:00 PM)


    good saying it really good keep up the good work :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 3, 2010



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