Jesus Castorena

Rookie (September 13,1993 / New Mexico)

Heartbreak - Poem by Jesus Castorena

You have been dating her for 2 years
You think you are in love
Now you're in tears
You want to tell her that you're in love
But it's not with her

She has been dating him for 2 years
She wants to be in love
Now she's in tears
She wants to tell him but she is afraid
To say that she had sex and she was paid

He loves the needle
She loves sex

He desn't care much for sex
She hates drugs

They wouldn't be dating of they knew

He has an addiction
She has a problem
It's a heartbreak for the two

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  • (12/5/2009 12:20:00 PM)


    This is a beautiful displayed story,
    i love it its unique
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 5, 2009



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