Friday, October 7, 2016

Heaven Comments

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What does the Heaven avail a woman?
A virtuous, a vestal has to face seventy satina (step-wife)
Yet, my mother has no nuisance to spend time on her prayer rug
A bright prayer sore dances on my father's forehead
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Zillur Rahman
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Chinedu Dike 07 October 2016

Brilliant encapsulation of thought, well articulated and elegantly penned in good poetic diction with spiritual insight. Beautiful poem nicely brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing Zillur. Please read my poem COLOSSAL MISCARRIAGE OF JUSTICE (i.e the execution of Christ) .

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