Friday, May 21, 2010

Heavenly Bodies Comments

Rating: 4.0

When the lovers return to Earth
And discover that in their absence
Nothing of worth,
Can be recovered from their loss.
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Sherri Coulter 03 June 2010

^5 and smiles in 10's.

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Gregory Pierre-jerome 02 June 2010

nice poem very unique and simple

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Edward Rhodes 28 May 2010

Beautiful - I particularly like the last line, 'As though the stars were to blame'

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