Thursday, April 26, 2007

Hell Bent And Glorious Comments

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Hell bent and glorious,
Pleasured on forbidden pleasures.
Weeping children adorn the playgrounds,
Littered like autumn leaves.
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Ian Francis O' Reilly
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Michael Fischer 26 April 2007

Great poem! 'We fly to oblivion, unsuspecting! ' was a great closing line to your poem. Writing about death can get congested, but your interpretation of it was refreshing. Well thought out and well executed. -Michael

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