Hello And Good Bye Poem by dani fries

Hello And Good Bye

Rating: 5.0


the world is spining and just wont stop

my head is weriling and
my heart feels like it jusst stoped

you walked into my life
then just walked out

you gave me a hello
but no good bye

now i see you in jail and i feel like i wont to cry
you have done wrong now your paying time

i came to see you
i say hello then good bye
but dont you fret you will always be in my mind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sans Serif 01 September 2009

I love the emotion you create. I can almost feel the pain you must have went through. Definite 10.

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Shekhar Joshi 01 September 2009

a sad poem.......nicely written.........

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