Her Poem by Jim Milks

Her

Rating: 5.0


I sit
Alone, Tired
Watching the clouds drift by
The sun slips down day into night
Beneath the coldhearted orb I see her
Still. Her memory haunts my dreams.
Memories are all I
have to hold, so
I sit

© JPM 10/1/08

This is an experimentation in formal poetry, this is known as a Rictameter.

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Jackie Renee 01 October 2008

beautiful. so much emotion in such few words.

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